Friday, October 21, 2005

The sequel

Even thought I wasnt so big on the 55 word poem tag I did an off the cuff bit in the comments section in response to this post , later decided that I might as well as put it up on my blog.

Buried my emotions
Returned to my life
Some things aren't meant 2b
She was my brother's wife

Soon the spark went out
They were constant fights
And we made a connection
Though I knew it wasnt right

They frown upon us
My brother calls me a rogue
I know I've found the one
Anyways lesbianism is in vogue

There's my shot at 55 with a twist :). Shall not be tagging anyone, ppl visiting this blog are welcome to come up with their own versions.

17 comments:

Anonymous said...
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KM said...

lol...that was cool rohan!
quite talented u are!
keetay raho!
lol!

Point 5 said...

Interesting adaptation....but since I had read Casablanca's poem b4, I sorta knew what to expect....

totti said...

It was brilliant! I thought i will add another angle with some shoddy poetry!

whoa!,things look messy
you all mite say
her brother was a sissy
and his wife was gay
....
....
Some think its funny
and some think its freaky
if you like the story
Sing along with aunt phoebe

Imagine Phoebe sitting with all the kids and singing the song about monica, rachel and ross. You figure who are what in the roles! :))

Casablanca said...

Yay! The sequel has been officially blogged. Good stuff :)

Madame Mahima said...

oo good one rohan ;)
i think u'd make a hot lesbian
:P

janani said...

lol! That was great! :-) Totti's verses are cool too. :-)

Rohan Kumar said...

@khizzy Thnx and I assume keetay raho are words of encouragement in either Punjabi or urdu, excuse me mera haath dono mein zara tang hai :)

@pointy thnx

@totti That is pretty good man, Phoebe wud have proud of that piece

@casa And we have only u to blame for that :)

@manhima I am sure u can come up with better compliments :), that's one I am not so sure I can be proud of

@janani Thnx totti did do a great job didnt he

totti said...

rohan - you can add that to your list of compliments you would rather not have in your resume ;)

janani - thx :) when is the next blog?

Rohan Kumar said...

@totti That one just made a new list I guess and topped it too by a fair margin (I never even knew there wud be such a list someday)

Casablanca said...
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totti said...

rohan - don't tell me you forgot that scathing insult from some venkatachalam or someone who wanted you to change the pic because he mistook you for a female!!

Rohan Kumar said...

@totti since u are the only one who seems hung up on that fact till now I shall make sure I direct him to ur blog

Jinguchakka said...

lol! Ultimate 55 I've come across Man!

Rohan Kumar said...

@jinguchakka that's a big compliment indeed considering the number of 55's floating around thnx

Minal said...

Hi Rohan,
Came here through the collective 55-word blog.
I really really liked that twist in the tale.
Neat Work:-)

Rohan Kumar said...

@minal thnx a lot i think I have been to ur blog before discussing music and cricket with u