Wednesday, December 28, 2005

Suspended animation

The journey's been long
But I've stayed strong
The road limbers down to this large door
Somewhere behind which things I long for lie in store
I wait underneath holding out hope
Its about time life threw me a rope
There's another road its winding and long
I don't think that's where my heart belongs
I could call out asked to be let through
However a lurking fear wont let me do
I don't want him to not let me pass through this station
So there my life lies in suspended animation

12 comments:

totti said...

Well, a couple of things come to mind about what this could be about.each theory looks equally improbably as other.i have to talk to sherlock holmes about this.meanwhile, you hang in there buddy! :p

very pseud.i am sure pointy will bulb on this one though :)). he had taken a "rapid english in 30 days course" just before he came to US.So...

Point 5 said...

Rohan..Nice one man....Did u c Ponting's aggressive declaration, 366 to win in 130+ overs !!!

@Totti..stop taking cheap potshots...dont they teach u these things in AOL

Anarkist said...

Well, what can I say....I am poetically challenged. But I get what u are trying to say......just not what you are saying about.

OnLY OnE..! said...

That was really good.

Madame Mahima said...

nice one rohan!
life in limbo stinks...hang in there...the new year will bring with it no more stagnation!
forward ho!

Swathi Sambhani aka Chimera said...

hope the new yr brings with it a gazillion new dreams....

Anonymous said...

very nice! hang in there, everything comes with an expiration date this shall end as well.

Thetis said...

just dropped in to say "happy new year" :)

totti said...

Happy New Year!! i came by your place yesterday night to surprise !K-11 guys had some potluck :p

Casablanca said...

Nicely written Rohan... though sounds a little painful.

I hope you're doing well, whatever you are doing.

And yes...
*drumroll*
Medha has finally continued the blogtale!!!!!

M (tread softly upon) said...

Rohan I hope you do take the path where your heart belongs. "Hope" is one of the most beautiful words in this world.
Haven't seen much of you lately. Hope things are going well for you. Wish you a happy new year and hope all your dreams come true!

Rohan Kumar said...

@Totti Aha Pointy unmasked ;)

@pointy Thnx, asking anyone to chase 366 isnt aggressive in any cricketing book I know of :)

@Anarkist I think u do get the gist of it and I guess that's a good thing in all 'Poems for the Poetically challenged 101' classes

@Shruti Thnx

@Mahima Thnx and here's raising a drink to what you stated

@Swathi and we all hope so likewise :)

@ad Thnx, hoping likewise

@Thetis Nice to see you back and same to you

@totti Same to you, guess you were on the wrong end of the surprise

@Casablanca Thnx and I m doing just fine :), just checked the blog tale.....its looking promising

@M Wishing you a very happy new year too and well you will see a lot more of me around this year I promise