Time has come its time we had a talk
I sense a difference of opinion so c’mon kiddo lets take a walk
I’ve just been told you are kinda unwelcome
They say you symbolize sin something needs to be done
The only reason why I shed those tears
Is because I mebbe the reason why you got here
Even though you had come to be a part of me
Time has come that I set you free
I always thought I gave you joy
You were my master I was your little toy
You never talked to me lately something had seemed amiss
But I never thought it would come to this
As you prepare to push me up heaven’s stairs
Remember you are the reason why I got here
Do you think by doing this your soul will ever be free
I wanna see the world Mommy let me be
Not big fan of hip hop or anything but if this thing was ever to be put into music rap would be a perfect choice.
11 comments:
Can i be the singer then? :p nicely put though may be i a little of on the gist of the whole thing. Halla Bol!
wooooah!
lol...intense rohan!
ur quite the talented one!
good one...u may be interested in joining the band "36B"...started by me and Pinky....the band became famous for the song "Dream/Concentrate/Confusion" :)...incase u didt know...
rap?
i thought that was nice bit of poetry.. er.. whats the diff?
NIce Post!!! to join pointy's band or a rap though you need to accomodate the 'F' word in your poetry and rate it PG-13..
@Totti since u didnt make the cut to even Pointy's band I am guessing u arent the best singer around in 16801. Plus u gotta really work on ur Hindi diction Allahbaad @##$#@@@@##$
@khizzy thnx, watsup with the changing pics?
@pointy Only if u dont try and make the kinda music that makes it to Ozfests :)
@thetis I am not African American to comment with sufficient authority of that topic :), but from watever lil I know of rap that piece itself wudnt really qualify as one and therefore I mentioned in passing that the emotions somehow wud come out better if the poetry was put to rap.
@susu U think I shall have to put in the number of words I can rhyme with the F word on my application for Pointy's band :)
n so did i think it was a neat piece of poetry ...till u mentioned rap. did i miss anything?
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@swathi As i stated b4 the piece is poetry only but just that I mentioned in passing that the emotions somehow wud come out better if the poetry was put to rap.
@pointy u got urself a new member
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