A: As I stand alone
B: waiting to come undone
A: I see the world in chains
B: Wondering if its worth all the pains
A: I see light
B: Even though it aint so bright
A: It must be a dream
B: Whatever it mebbe its a chance to redeem
A: I take my first step into the "lake" blanketed by darkness
B: My soul hurts in the cold starkness
A: Oh angel- where are thy
B: I am around you, take my wings and fly
That happens to be a line by line reproduction of a chat session I had with a friend of mine recently as we tried to engage in some poetic ‘jugalbandi’ with yours truly playing ‘B’. The person concerned insisted that her lines were better but I did manage to eke out a benefit of doubt statement from her because I was the one who was supposed to come up with the 2nd line all the time (which generally includes all the rhyming words) as she enjoyed a tad extra creative freedom (. So I guess there’s a sequel coming up sometime soon.
15 comments:
hehehe...cool idea... and good attempt by both... will look forward to the sequel!
Hmmm... cute guy, you! Sorry if it embarrasses u, just being honest... :)
tat was some poetical dialogue,
flirting seems to have taken new dimensions these days :))
"A: Oh angel- where are thy"
You = Thee... not Thy
Thy = Your
Sorry for intrusion.
pretty cool, but next time you can have ur friend do the rhyming and have the better end of the deal.
real cool. looking forward to the sequel too!:)
@preethi sequel coming up to a blog near u
@shivangi Too late I am all flattered and embarassed (of course it didnt help that I checked up the comments tab thrice ;) )
@swathi The Flirt lines open up on rohan********@yahoo.com on demand
@urs truly conman I do know my thy's from thee's this just happened to be a word by word reproduction a chat conversation (I will fwd ur corrections to the person 'A')
@m Yeah I know it wud be so much easier doing the first line
@totti thnx sequel shows up only when u decide to write ur next blog :)
good one.....u shld have ended with one of those audibles which say "Please do us all a favour and unplug your computer" :)
Wow this is such a great idea! The outcome is pretty good too. Hurry up with the sequel. Perhaps you can try this with 3 people so that it's fair for everyone. :-)
Lol...@ forward the corrections.
heheheheehahahahahahahaha....
God... Have mercy on me.
@pointy Thnx if u like the audibles then download the yahoo messenger from yahoo.co.in it has an amazing collection of Indianised audibles
@young_buddha I am no expert but I think its a bit of both
@janani thnx why dont u pioneer some work in the 3 way chat domain :)
@urs truly....Always nice to make ppl crack up. God might have mercy on you, just wish he was as generous with all those who might have had to endure you.
lol..ur such a drama!
Interesting experiment. My vote goes for you, since keeping up the rhyme is definitely tougher! But then again, I only read your blog, and not your friend's, so maybe I'm just biased :)
Happy flirting! ;)
@khizzy I just try and keep up with all the drama that goes on in real life :)
@megha I concur with ur bias ;), my friend doesnt have a blog anyways. Also
Me no casanova, me no flirt
So ladies plzz stop kicking around all that dirt :)
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