Flying high like a bird
Reaching out for horizons undiscovered
Encompassing the wild spirit within
Emerging free of the shackles of my wicked life
Dwelling into the unknown confines of my soul
Omnipresent is a search for what probably lurks within
Myopic as it maybe I kinda know what I seek
This was essentially an experiement with a style of a poem where the first word of every line adds up to form the underlying theme. I couldn't add the rider initially as my net had kinda given up on me but from I am able to gather from user comments most of you probably were quick to latch onto it.
16 comments:
Nice, very nice.
I wish I were u...I am not myopic I am blind!
profound yet poetic, wow!
Nice.
Hey nice one! :-)
"The Alchemist"'s gist!! Right? :-))
@young_buddha dash me a mail and I'll mail u the details, the blog is not meant for such stuff
@thnx there r days when i wish I were blind too :)
@swathi thnx I made sure i didnt kick up another debate by mentioning rap this time too :)
@totti thnx
@janani thnx
@jinguchakka funny that u mention that book coz even though I have 2 copies of it lying sround at my place I still havent gotten around to reading it.
nice...i never know how to comment on poetry...so hmmm.
very nice rohan!
nice one... creative indeed.... :D!
@khizzy hmmm wud have sufficed :)
@preethi thnx and am assuming its ur 1st time here so keep visiting
..Dude, u seemed to be writing a lot on philosophical side nowadays..great to c....
..keep track of the Aussie comeback
@pointy nice to know that
Comebac wat comebac?...huh
hi...first time visit to ur blog...g8 verses...keep up the gud work:)
@anonymous thnx keep visiting
was going through your ex-blog meagainstmyself thing. found this statement Flirting is a tonic for the ego. Ask susu for his comments :p
yay for acrostics! very nice :)
@bala thnx
@totti u drop these hints and leave me high and dry till the next time I meet u, nyways will try and get the whole story out of Susu
@rehtwo I had no clue wat acrostics stood for and I actually had to google it to find the real meaning (sheepish grin), thnx for lettin me know this is an established form of poetry and keep visiting
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